Special thanks go to Linda McDonald for taking meeting notes. One special piece of advice that Porter passed along to the San Diego writers in attendance: "Draw on the emotion from your own life to power your writing." Source: San Diego Examiner.com
- State the emotion. Porter said that this technique, while the most basic, is best used when the author is writing in 1st person.
- Explain the emotion by stating it and then conveying details. "Frank was angry and his fists were clenched."
- Use dialogue to show the emotion. Porter told the San Diego attendees that if a wife says, "Forget it!" to her husband, this conveys a great deal of emotion in two short words. Such exchanges are "bullet like" and make great dialogue.
- Using actions such as in a love scene can convey what characters are feeling without the need for words.
- Introspection is another way to help readers understand a character's thoughts. Perhaps a character is doing one thing while thinking another.
- Porter also said that she uses opposing goals for characters to set up emotional conflicts. She finds that this technique brings readers in touch with the characters' emotions right away.
- Certain settings also enhance emotional scenes. For instance, a love scene set in the desert at night becomes suddenly much smaller due to the dimness and twinkling stars.
- Emotions will ring true with readers when they are authentic. Stripping emotions bare is even more effective, yet melodramatic outbursts or descriptions have the opposite effect.
- Suppressing emotions can be very dramatic. Porter says that she uses this technique with male characters or with female characters who have "shut down." Underneath, they feel their emotions, yet on the surface they refuse to show them.
- Mix it up. Be sure to use a variety of techniques and not get locked into using the same options all the time.
Jane's latest women's fiction is She's Gone Country.


















